30. září 2014

Barvitý popis

Co činí popisné pasáže čtivými? Dokážete si po přečtení uvedeného textu představit nejen zámek Baskerville, ale i atmosféru, která ho obklopuje?

THE HOUND OF THE BASKERVILLES
By A. Conan Doyle

http://www.gutenberg.org/files/2852/2852-h/2852-h.htm


I remembered the case well, for it was one in which Holmes had taken an
interest on account of the peculiar ferocity of the crime and the
wanton brutality which had marked all the actions of the assassin. The
commutation of his death sentence had been due to some doubts as to his
complete sanity, so atrocious was his conduct. Our wagonette had topped
a rise and in front of us rose the huge expanse of the moor, mottled
with gnarled and craggy cairns and tors. A cold wind swept down from
it and set us shivering. Somewhere there, on that desolate plain, was
lurking this fiendish man, hiding in a burrow like a wild beast, his
heart full of malignancy against the whole race which had cast him out.
It needed but this to complete the grim suggestiveness of the barren
waste, the chilling wind, and the darkling sky. Even Baskerville fell
silent and pulled his overcoat more closely around him.

We had left the fertile country behind and beneath us. We looked back on
it now, the slanting rays of a low sun turning the streams to threads of
gold and glowing on the red earth new turned by the plough and the broad
tangle of the woodlands. The road in front of us grew bleaker and wilder
over huge russet and olive slopes, sprinkled with giant boulders. Now
and then we passed a moorland cottage, walled and roofed with stone,
with no creeper to break its harsh outline. Suddenly we looked down into
a cuplike depression, patched with stunted oaks and firs which had been
twisted and bent by the fury of years of storm. Two high, narrow towers
rose over the trees. The driver pointed with his whip.

"Baskerville Hall," said he.

Its master had risen and was staring with flushed cheeks and shining
eyes. A few minutes later we had reached the lodge-gates, a maze of
fantastic tracery in wrought iron, with weather-bitten pillars on either
side, blotched with lichens, and surmounted by the boars' heads of the
Baskervilles. The lodge was a ruin of black granite and bared ribs of
rafters, but facing it was a new building, half constructed, the first
fruit of Sir Charles's South African gold.

Through the gateway we passed into the avenue, where the wheels were
again hushed amid the leaves, and the old trees shot their branches in a
sombre tunnel over our heads. Baskerville shuddered as he looked up
the long, dark drive to where the house glimmered like a ghost at the
farther end.


Domácí úkol:
Přečtete si povídku Karla Čapka Experiment profesora Rousse.

ukázka:

“Pojďte sem,” přerušil ho Amerikán velitelsky, “tady
si sedněte.
Vy musíte říkat, co vás první napadne. Vy nesmíte pře
mýšlet, vy
musíte plácnout mechanically, ani sám nevíte co. Vy
rozumíte?”
“Prosím,” řekl ochotně pokusný muž, trochu tísněn a
uditoriem
tak významným; načež odkašlal a úzkostlivě mrkal jako
maturant.
“Strom,” vystřelil na něj učenec.
“Mohutný,” zašeptal stařík.
“Jak prosím?” ptal se učenec, jaksi nechápaje.
“Lesní velikán,” vysvětloval muž ostýchavě.
“Ah tak. Ulice!”
“Ulice ... ulice v slavnostním hávu,” děl mužík.
“Co tím míníte?”
“Prosím slavnost. Nebo pohřeb.”
“So. Tak vy máte říci jenom slavnost. Pokud možno je
dním
slovem.”
“Ano prosím.”
“Tak dál: Obchod.”