Dick Francis - živá angličtina

Čtrnáctého února 2010 zemřel na Kajmanských ostrovech britský spisovatel Dick Francis, tvůrce žánru dostihového detektivního románu a legenda dostihového sportu v Británii.
Jeho detektivky se od počátku setkávaly v české republice s velkým ohlasem; vycházely až na výjimky 60.let v nakladatelství Olympia. Francisovou dvorní překladatelkou a přítelkyní byla doktorka Jaroslava Moserová.
Francisův styl je čtivý, živý a aktivní, aniž by to ubíralo na kvalitě a pestrosti jeho angličtiny. Popisné části zůstávají nápaditě barvité, a přímé promluvy vypovídají hodně o jednotlivých postavách.

1. Vyhledejte na internetu informace o Francisovi a jeho díle; pokuste se najít zejména recenze, české i anglické, a názory čtenářů. Alespoň jeden zajímavý odkaz na čtenářské ohlasy zkopírujte do komentáře k tomuto blogu.

2. V capse najdete text románu "The Edge". Zalistujte, seznamte se rámcově s textem, případně přečtěte celou detektivku :)

3. Přeložte dva úryvky z úvodu knihy, které jsou v následujícím textu tučně zvýrazněny. Soustřeďte se na maximální zachování atmosféry, snažte se využívat české sytaktické prvky a nezasahovat přitom do originální větné struktury víc, než je nutno. V přímé řeči respektujte stylové zařazení. Hotový překlad vložte do komentáře k tomuto blogu (nezapomeňte se podepsat).

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Dick Francis - The Edge

Chapter One

I was following Derry Welfram at a prudent fifty paces when he stumbled, fell face down on the wet tarmac and lay still. I stopped, watching, as nearer hands stretched to help him up, and saw the doubt, the apprehension, the shock flower in the opening mouths of the faces around him. The word that formed in consequence in my own brain was violent, of four letters and unexpressed.
Derry Welfram lay face down, unmoving, while the fourteen runners for the three-thirty race at York stalked closely past him, the damp jockeys looking down and back with muted curiosity, minds on the business ahead, bodies shivering in the cold near-drizzle of early October. The man was drunk. One could read their minds. Midafternoon falling-down drunks were hardly unknown on racecourses. It was a miserable, uncomfortable afternoon. Good luck to him, the drunk.
I retreated a few unobtrusive steps and went on watching. Some of the group who had been nearest to Welfram when he fell were edging away, looking at the departing horses, wanting to leave, to see the race. A few shuffled from foot to foot, caught between a wish to desert and shame at doing so, and one, more civic-minded, scuttled off for help.
I drifted over to the open door of the paddock bar, from where several customers looked out on the scene. Inside, the place was full of dryish people watching life on closed-circuit television, life at second hand.
One of the group in the doorway said to me, 'What's the matter with him?'
'I've no idea.' I shrugged. 'Drunk, I dare say.'
I stood there quietly, part of the scenery, not pushing through into the bar but standing just outside the door under the eaves of the overhanging roof, trying not to let the occasional drips from above fall down my neck.
The civic-minded man came back at a run, followed by a heavy man in a St. John's Ambulance uniform. People had by now half-turned Welfram and loosened his tie; but seemed to step back gladly at the approach of officialdom. The St. John's man rolled Welfram fully on to his back and spoke decisively into a walkie-talkie. Then he bent Welfram's head backwards and tried mouth-to-mouth resuscitation.
I couldn't think of any circumstance which would have persuaded me to put my mouth on Welfram's. Perhaps it was easier between absolute strangers. Not even to save his life, I thought, though I'd have preferred him alive.
Another man arrived in a hurry, a thin raincoated man I knew by sight to be the racecourse doctor. He tapped the ambulance man on the shoulder, telling him to discontinue, and himself laid first his fingers against Welfram's neck, then his stethoscope against the chest inside the opened shirt. After a long listening pause, perhaps as much as half a minute, he straightened and spoke to the ambulance man, meanwhile stuffing the stethoscope into his raincoat pocket. Then he departed, again at a hurry, because the race was about to begin and the racecourse doctor, during each running, had to be out on the course to succour the jockeys.
The ambulance man held a further conversation with his walkie-talkie but tried no more to blow air into unresponsive lungs, and presently some colleagues of his arrived with a stretcher and covering blanket, and loaded up and carried away, decently hidden, the silver hair, the bulging navy-blue suit and the stilled heart of a heartless man.
The group that had stood near him broke up with relief, two or three of them heading straight for the bar.
The man who had earlier asked me, asked the newcomers the same question. 'What's the matter with him?'
'He's dead,' one of them said briefly and unnecessarily. 'God, I need a drink.' He pushed his way into the bar, with the doorway spectators, me among them, following him inside to listen. 'He just fell down and died.' He shook his head, 'Strewth, it makes you think.' He tried to catch the barman's eye. 'You could hear his breath rattling... then it just stopped... he was dead before the St. John's man got there... Barman, a double gin... make it a treble...'
'Was there any blood?' I asked.
'Blood?' He half looked in my direction, 'Course not. You don't get blood with heart attacks... Barman, a gin and tonic... not much tonic... get a shunt on, will you?’
'Who was he?' someone said.
'Search me. Just some poor mug.'
On the television the race began, and everyone, including myself, swivelled round to watch, though I couldn't have said afterwards what had won. With Derry Welfram dead my immediate job was going to be much more difficult, if not temporarily impossible. The three-thirty in those terms was irrelevant.
I left the bar in the general break-up after the race and wandered about inconclusively for a bit, looking for other things that were not as they should be and, as on many days, not seeing any. I particularly looked for anyone who might be looking for Derry Welfram, hanging around for that purpose outside the ambulance-room door, but no one arrived to enquire. An announcement came over the loud-speakers presently asking for anyone who had accompanied a Mr D. Welfram to the races to report to the clerk of the course's office, so I hung about outside there for a while also, but no one accepted the invitation.
Welfram the corpse left the racecourse in an ambulance en route to the morgue and after a while I drove away from York in my unremarkable Audi, and punctually at five o'clock telephoned on my car phone to John Millington, my immediate boss, as required.
'What do you mean, he's dead?' he demanded. 'He can't be.'
'His heart stopped,' I said.
'Did someone kill him?'
Neither of us would have been surprised if someone had, but I said, 'No, there wasn't any sign of it. I'd been following him for ages. I didn't see anyone bump into him, or anything like that. And there was apparently no blood. Nothing suspicious. He just died.'
'Shit.' His angry tone made it sound as if it were probably my fault. John Millington, retired policeman (Chief Inspector), currently Deputy Head of the Jockey Club Security Service, had never seemed to come to terms with my covert and indeterminate appointment to his department, even though in the three years I'd been working for him we'd seen a good few villains run off the racecourse.
'The boy's a blasted amateur,' he'd protested when I was presented to him as a fact, not a suggestion. 'The whole thing's ridiculous.'
He no longer said it was ridiculous but we had never become close friends.
'Did anyone make waves? Come asking for him?' he demanded.
'No, no one.'
'Are you sure?' He cast doubt as always on my ability.
'Yes, positive.' I told him of my vigils outside the various doors.
'Who did he meet, then? Before he snuffed it?'
'I don't think he met anybody, unless it was very early in the day, before I spotted him. He wasn't searching for anyone, anyway. He made a couple of bets on the Tote, drank a couple of beers, looked at the horses and watched the races. He wasn't busy today.'
Millington let loose the four-letter word I'd stifled. 'And we're back where we started,' he said furiously.
'Mm,' I agreed.
'Call me Monday morning,' Millington said, and I said, 'Right,' and put the phone down. Tonight was Saturday. Sunday was my regular day off, and Monday too, except in times of trouble. I could see my Monday vanishing fast.